The diagram shows the manufacturing process of sweater Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The diagram shows the manufacturing process of sweater.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given process illustrates the procedure for manufacturing sweaters in a clothing factory.
Overall, there is a series of steps, beginning with the gathering of yarn and finishing with the delivery of finished products.
At the start of the process, the yarn is collected and then wound and allocated. Next it is knitted for making sweater panels. Following this, an online inspection needs to be conducted before the panels are linked. After that, these pieces of garment undergo another online supervision before being trimmed to remove excessive fabric. After this step, the panels are examined under light and mended. If the products do not meet the quality standard, they are returned to the second step.
At this stage of the process, buttons are made on the clothing before being washed, labelled and ironing. The sweaters are then inspected by the quality personnel of the factory before they are folded and placed into packs. These finished pieces of garment come to the final inspection before eventually being delivered to different locations for consumption.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27325581395 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60160614159 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610465116279 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.2272333386 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4545454545 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6363636364 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27272727273 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0787371745395 0.215688989381 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362122365352 0.103423049105 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507109758594 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0598039947551 0.15604864568 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555976930598 0.0819641961636 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 61.2550243902 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.