The diagram shows the process of recycling car batteries

Essay topics:

The diagram shows the process of recycling car batteries.

The diagram Illustrates how to recycle old batteries, instead of old disposing of them directly in landfills.

Overall, The process diagram shows that plastic cases and grids of old batteries can be processed as raw materials to create new batteries, while acid can be reused for manufacturing other materials.

Used car batteries are collected from car garages and then delivered to factories for recycling. Plastic cases are separated from batteries and subsequently ground into plastic powder, which is used to create new cases.

At the same time, the grid of each collected battery is placed in a furnace, where it is processed and developed into a brand-new one. The new grid, combined with the new plastic case mentioned earlier, will produce a new car battery.

The acid of the battery is also recycled for practical use. It is mixed with chemicals until it becomes crystal, which is subsequently employed for the production of glass and textile.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 812.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20512820513 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78358695652 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596153846154 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5424759439 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.625 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309613508965 0.215688989381 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120547831437 0.103423049105 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774438497568 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14541445676 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494946699064 0.0819641961636 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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