The diagram shows the stages and equipment used in the process of cement making and how cement is used to produce the concrete for building purposes.

Essay topics:

The diagram shows the stages and equipment used in the process of cement making and how cement is used to produce the concrete for building purposes.

The given diagram illustrates the information about procedure of cement production and concrete production by using types of equipments and distinct stages.

The first diagram shows that, to produce cement first step is crashing of limestone and clay and produced powder from this is passed through a mixture. After that, the powder via rotating heater where heat is constantly given. Then, the material is passed in grinder machine for the final touch. The cement is then packed and ready to go for selling in the market.

The second diagram reviews, how the concrete is produced for building work. In the first stage, 15 % cement, 10 % water, 25 % sand and 50 % stones are mixed clockwise in concrete mixture. After all this production of concrete take place.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...re mixed clockwise in concrete mixture. After all this production of concrete take pl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, then, after all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 639.0 965.302439024 66% => OK
No of words: 125.0 196.424390244 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.112 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.34370152488 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50964128533 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 186.3 283.868780488 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.947331922 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.875 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.625 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369345674357 0.215688989381 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134858418321 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0970499859745 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230737442994 0.15604864568 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425345051796 0.0819641961636 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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