The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton.
A glance a the two figures provided reveals the percentage of people using different transportations and the motivations for them to use car in the city.
In general, it is evident that car was a major transport that citizens used in Edmonton compared with other public transportation and taxi. also, the main purpose of people chose to drive themselves is the way on the work.
With regard to the proportion on transport, the city had four kinds of transportation(namely car, lrt, bus, and taxi). 45 percent of interviewees adopted car to go outside, which was ten percent more of people who take bus. In contrast, the percentage of people using lrt and taxi were both accounted for ten percent that were considerably lower than taxi and car.
reasons for using car in the city varied a lot. 55 percent of interviewees drove their own car to commute to work, which was also the most popular reason among others. The portion of taking children to school and business were similar, with 40 and 45 percent respectively. Meanwhile, shopping and leisure activities accounted for the same proportion with 15 percent.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, in contrast, in general, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 940.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96311927302 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590425531915 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6986531681 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209134301993 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924033813278 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0907878703761 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153885580231 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592185357395 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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