The diagrams below show the design for a wave energy machine and its location Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The 2 diagrams illustrate how a wave-energy machine operates and how it is located.
Overall, this wave-energy machine uses water levels and airflow at sea with a turbine generating electricity. Additionally, there are two location options for this machine which bring both benefits and drawbacks.

Looking at the first diagram, a wave machine is designed to have 2 chambers. The first and lowest one is used for allowing water levels and airflow in and out. The second chamber is equipped with a turbine which directly generates electric power. Specifically, when there are large waves, the water levels enter the first chamber rise which pushes a great amount of air up to the second chamber. Next, this airflow drives and turns the turbine on one side, the other side is turned by the airflow from the outside coming in. In this way, the turbine rotates and create electricity.
In terms of location, the machine located near the coast cost a low installation budget but bring out low output because of small waves. Adversely, locating far from the coast bring much larger waves and help the machine generate higher output. However, the second option needs much more installation costs than the first one.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, second

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1013.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03980099502 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54511530982 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592039800995 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1358629728 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4166666667 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08333333333 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145063704968 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612630752332 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632001923348 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10893399293 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413947591444 0.0819641961636 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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