The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.
The diagrammatic representation depicts the physical changes taken place in silk larvae and steps of making clothes made of it’s byproduct silk. Overall it takes four and five steps respectively to manufacture silk from the worm to making process of it.
Firstly, it takes at least ten days for the worms to hatch out from the eggs in form of larvae soon after it consume the leaves of mulberry in order to further growth. Within a month, larva starts realising silk which afterwards forms into a cocoon shape. And finally the moth is been came out from the shell.
Secondly, the manufacturer brings the collected cocoons of silk threads in order to boil into water so that it can be unwind where the threads can stretch upto 900 meters in length. Before the process of dying they are been combined by twisting method. Lastly the threads are weaved in order to make silk fabrics.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'of its byproduct'?
Suggestion: of its byproduct
...larvae and steps of making clothes made of it’s byproduct silk. Overall it takes four and five st...
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Line 2, column 285, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
...oon shape. And finally the moth is been came out from the shell. Secondly, the manu...
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Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... can stretch upto 900 meters in length. Before the process of dying they are been comb...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'woven'.
Suggestion: woven
...twisting method. Lastly the threads are weaved in order to make silk fabrics.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, lastly, second, secondly, so, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 730.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74025974026 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41132147236 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649350649351 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.7172345072 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.25 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0903398424445 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404760380826 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420791289479 0.0843802449381 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0627567035862 0.15604864568 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397800340961 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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