The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth
The two diagrams describe the life cycle of the silkworm and also show the production of silk cloth.
It is clear from the first diagrams show that the life cycle of a silkworm begins from the eggs by the mother and then become silkworm larva after 10 days. Silkworm larva usually eat mulberry leaf that food help to silkworm larva existing. After 6-4 weeks, completes second stage of the life cycle. In their third stage, they create silk thread and larva and then from 3 to 8 days create an cocoon. The stage lasts from around 16 days and then cocoon become moth in the final stage. With time the moths become grow-up and life cycle the processes again.
The second picture show that the production of silk cloth including 5 stages. In the first stage, the silk thread shells of the silkworm are selected and then boiled in the next stages. After shells are unwind exactly 300 to 900 . Then thread are twist and dyed. And finally, silk are weaved and dyed again.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... larva and then from 3 to 8 days create an cocoon. The stage lasts from around 16 ...
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Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ted and then boiled in the next stages. After shells are unwind exactly 300 to 900 . ...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'unwound'.
Suggestion: unwound
...ed in the next stages. After shells are unwind exactly 300 to 900 . Then thread are tw...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ter shells are unwind exactly 300 to 900 . Then thread are twist and dyed. And fin...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'woven'.
Suggestion: woven
...e twist and dyed. And finally, silk are weaved and dyed again.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, second, so, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 792.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55172413793 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.96213960684 2.65546596893 74% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 225.0 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5477213744 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.0 112.824112599 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.5 22.9334400587 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.450408948185 0.215688989381 209% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16113009125 0.103423049105 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.161480191935 0.0843802449381 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.379646801097 0.15604864568 243% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.170927124744 0.0819641961636 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 13.2329268293 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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