The diagrams illustrate the life cycle of salmon that categorize as large fish from egg until adult salmon.
It is clear that salmon experience three steps of life cycle and four shapes along it life span.
The first stage of life cycle is salmon eggs. It lay down among small stones and below reeds in upper river that wave is categorized as slow moving. In fact, the time for this step is approximately 5 – 6 months. The next stage is fry with size about 3 – 8 cm and the habitat move into lower river, wave typical is fast flowing for nearly 4 years.
After that, fry develop bigger into smolt. It size between 12 – 15 cm. on this stage, smolt migrates to open sea with the life span around 5 years. The final stage is salmon 70 – 76 cm in size and it moves to upper river. Finally, the process starts over again.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'fried'.
Suggestion: fried
...imately 5 – 6 months. The next stage is fry with size about 3 – 8 cm and the habita...
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Line 7, column 47, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'sizes'?
Suggestion: sizes
...that, fry develop bigger into smolt. It size between 12 – 15 cm. on this stage, smol...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 679.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32484076433 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.03829617679 2.65546596893 77% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649681528662 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 201.6 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2210854427 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.7272727273 112.824112599 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.2727272727 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45454545455 5.23603664747 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158195904724 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615322048265 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850045217558 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126815382434 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0883357631091 0.0819641961636 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 13.2329268293 46% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.18 11.4140731707 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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