The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.
The diagram depicts the life cycle of a fish species of Salmon.
Overall, it can be seen that the life cycle of this species is a cyclical process ,starting from salmon eggs to adult salmon in the end.
At the beginning, Salmon fish lays eggs under pebbles, which is seen within reeds. These eggs stay in upper river for approx. 5-6 months, where slow-moving tides are found. After this time period, the eggs hatch and baby salmons come out. They are 3-8 cm of length in the first stage. In this stage, they are called by fry. Fries move to lower river with fast flowing tides and stay for approximately 4 years there before entering the next stage. Salmon fish is seen 12-15 cm size in the second stage and they are termed as smolt here.
These smolt swim to open sea to reach the final stage. It lives for approx. 5 years in that place and turns into adult salmon ,having 70-76cm of size in the third stage. From there, these adult fish come to the upper river for repeating the life cycle again.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 825.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45945945946 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.90837606265 2.65546596893 72% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8699525816 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.9285714286 112.824112599 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.2142857143 22.9334400587 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.71428571429 5.23603664747 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.09268292683 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252895163863 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948381738481 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147508192475 0.0843802449381 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250936635193 0.15604864568 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.190898015601 0.0819641961636 233% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 13.2329268293 47% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 61.2550243902 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.3012195122 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.7 11.4140731707 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 11.4329268293 39% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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