The diagrams show the greenhouse effect on the temperature of the Earth Describe the process

Essay topics:

The diagrams show the greenhouse effect on the temperature of the Earth. Describe the process

The diagrams show how the greenhouse effect and radiation from the sun reaches the Earth.
In general terms, the greenhouse effect happens when heat radiation from the sun is trapped the Earth's atmosphere.
First of all, heat radiation is produced by the sun. This radiation travels towards the Earth's atmosphere. About 20% of the sun's radiation is scattered and reflected by clouds. 6% of the radiation is scattered by the Earth's atmosphere and 19% of the radiation is absorbed by the Earth. So, the Earth is warmed by the sun's radiation.
Secondly, at niight some place of the Earth's heat is lost. After, the greenhouse gases in the atmosphere trap and reflect the heat back to the Earth. This heat makes our planet suitablee for life. However, the population may increa the amount of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere. More greenhouse trap and reflect more heat. This mean the Earth becomes warmer.

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Average: 8 (26 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'suns'' or 'sun's'?
Suggestion: suns'; sun's
...the Earths atmosphere. About 20% of the suns radiation is scattered and reflected by...
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Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'suns'' or 'sun's'?
Suggestion: suns'; sun's
...e Earth. So, the Earth is warmed by the suns radiation. Secondly, at niight some pl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, in general, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 754.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96052631579 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58417836833 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 73.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480263157895 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 214.2 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 22.4926829268 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.0542606423 43.030603864 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.0 112.824112599 51% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.6923076923 22.9334400587 51% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238598329799 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980308380635 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0986295925866 0.0843802449381 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19943438665 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115094579678 0.0819641961636 140% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.2329268293 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 61.2550243902 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.3 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.4329268293 44% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.9970731707 58% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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