The diagrams show how the bee makes honey and the stages in the production of honey. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features and making comparisons where relevant.
The given diagrams illustrate the life cycle of honeybees as well as the commercial production of honey. Overall, six stages are recorded in the life of the bees, which begins with laying eggs and ends up converting nectar into honey. There are five steps involved in the rest, from removal of the honeycomb to distribution and selling.
The first step is when queen bees lays their eggs in honeycombs. Subsequently, larvae hatch in the following three days. They are then fully grown in around a week, before being mature enough to leave the hive in three weeks later. After collecting nectar from a wide range of flowers, adult bees carefully deposit it into their hives. Eventually, honey is formed and the procedures are able to recycle again.
Turning to the honey production process, first of all, beekeepers detach the honeycombs from the hives. Once honey has been extracted with machines, the processed honey is boiled in order to get rid of unwanted bacteria. Following this, cleaned honey is then poured into several jars. Finally, honey jars are distributed to the public where they can meet various demands of customers.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, then, well, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03703703704 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51239752377 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645502645503 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.6180544895 43.030603864 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.3333333333 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190196107423 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659590258658 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496379819854 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125196150761 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509375214068 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.