These given graphs illustrate about the money investment by the parents of britain
towards their children's sports activities and the participation of the number of British children in 3 different sports including Football, Athletics and Swimming, for 6 year-span, from 2008 to 2014. This is clear from these graphs that Football was their favourite sports during that time. The unit of money was in pounds whereas the number of children was counted in millions.
Overall, British parents increased their investment during every year and in addition
the choice of sports were flactuated over this time period.
In 2008, the average monthly investment was around 20 pounds, which was increased significantly by 5 pounds after two years, 2010. Additionally, this spending reached to around 32 pounds, which was the highest investment, in 2014. During these 6 years the investment went up dramatically from 20 pounds per month to approximately 32 pounds per month.
Moreover, in 2008 Football was palyed by approximately 8 millions british children, which was flactuated over these time frame. This number went down slightly in 2010 with about 7.8 millions children. But again it rose moderately to around 9 millions in 2012 and reached to it's highest number with approximately 9.2 millions in the final year, 2014. Although, in 2008 the least played sports was Athletics with around .3 millions, it became the second highest plaed sports in 2014(Approximately 4.8 millions). Furthermore, Swimming, which was the second favourite sports among the british children was dropped to third choice in 2014. However, the number of children in Swimming was increased moderately between 2008 and 2014.(about 2.1 millions and aproximately 4 millions respectively).
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, third, whereas, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 33.7804878049 157% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 965.302439024 154% => OK
No of words: 273.0 196.424390244 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44688644689 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90688363956 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 106.607317073 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487179487179 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.9 283.868780488 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3501350016 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.384615385 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27881292674 0.215688989381 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11818621033 0.103423049105 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871674371592 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155097115116 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0889132049847 0.0819641961636 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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