The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

Essay topics:

The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

The charts represent the proportion of average energy used for six household goods and the amount of greenhouse gas emissions resulting from the energy usage in Australia.
Overall, heating was the highest energy used by Australian households but its gas emission rate is 4th highest. It is apparent that, other appliance and refrigeration had produced the greenhouse gas emissions in relation to its usage.
The majority of Australian household used energies for heating purposes (of 42%); this produced the least gas emissions of 15% in comparison to its usage. Meanwhile, cooling used 2% of energies and 4% energies used for lighting in Australia and which produced 3% and 8% of greenhouse gas emissions respectively.
In terms of other appliance and refrigeration, 15% of Australian household used energies for other appliances while 7% energy was used for refrigeration. In comparison to its usage, the greenhouse gas emission was produced of 28% for other appliances and 14% for refrigeration.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'so', 'while']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.361111111111 0.268076937826 135% => OK
Verbs: 0.122222222222 0.116061578633 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0666666666667 0.0759168565197 88% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0111111111111 0.0366838410393 30% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0277777777778 0.0131127313244 212% => OK
Prepositions: 0.15 0.155750635184 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0722222222222 0.0379272487307 190% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.13304585146 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0166666666667 0.0210936926555 79% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0555555555556 0.0948980150116 59% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00555555555556 0.00967000014798 57% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1001.0 1161.00487805 86% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.9 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.37579617834 5.90752243213 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73763899035 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.40127388535 0.337110787985 119% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.343949044586 0.247514529752 139% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.312101910828 0.171178102325 182% => Too many words length more than 7 chars.
words length more than 8 chars: 0.203821656051 0.112407865282 181% => Too many words length more than 8 chars.
Word Length SD: 3.13304585146 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 74.0 106.607317073 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471337579618 0.546246751206 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 36.4583755069 49.3433353143 74% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 8.93414634146 78% => OK
Sentence length: 22.4285714286 23.0094962315 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.2615550303 42.9750493124 47% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.0 135.714022679 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 23.0094962315 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.428571428571 0.689975730869 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 56.8234758872 47.7609492067 119% => OK
Elegance: 3.62068965517 2.94281807926 123% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314290658972 0.418131533498 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.272380100955 0.181151798455 150% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.112681706806 0.0850326197045 133% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.79517944541 0.706616315825 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.102381527741 0.157042692854 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191900169833 0.228904883108 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0994244357378 0.108899403657 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.341922404882 0.367819155151 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.108998979613 0.0812612215331 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251482221678 0.316326947829 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102126854475 0.0921553760075 111% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70731707317 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.08536585366 49% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 3.16585365854 158% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.02926829268 66% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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