The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the percentage of greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The first chart presents the proportion of energy consumed in six different household activities averagely, while the second chart gives the information about how much amount of greenhouse gas is emitted from those household tasks in Australia.
Overall, heating exhibits the maximum proportion of energy consumption, whereas cooling is the home task, which not only consumes lower energy but also produces minimum amount greenhouse gas, as compared to others.
Though heating contributes 42% of total energy consumption, it only creats 15% greenhouse fume. Water heating is the second highest energy wasted task (exactly 30% of energy), but, maximum 32% of detrimental greenhouse fume is introduced by this household activity. Refrigerator spends 7% of household energy, though it provides double amount of greenhouse gas.
Moreover, cooling and lighting are the lowest category services that waste only 2% and 4% of total energy respectively. Because of this low energy consumption, these also contributes minimal CFC (commercial name of greenhouse gas) gas emission. 3% for cooling and 8% for lighting. Other appliances contribute huge for spreading CFC gas into the air and consume exactly 15% of total energy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 226, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: gas
...nimal CFC commercial name of greenhouse gas gas emission. 3% for cooling and 8% for lig...
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Line 6, column 331, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (CFC) must be used with a third-person verb: 'gases', 'gasses'.
Suggestion: gases; gasses
...ances contribute huge for spreading CFC gas into the air and consume exactly 15% of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1035.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59459459459 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84375701863 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9841104583 43.030603864 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5555555556 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246463788399 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10059977789 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780624024804 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164160615163 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701450664024 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 11.4140731707 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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