The given picture illustrates the life of a honey been.

Essay topics:

The given picture illustrates the life of a honey been.

The given picture represents the different phases involved in metamorphosis of honey bees.

Overall, it is clear that the life cycle of honey been takes 34-36 days to complete. The metamorphosis process encompasses mainly 5 steps to attain the majority stage.

In the first phase of life cycle, adult female spawns 1 to 2 eggs for every three days. Next to it, the eggs hatch with in 9-10 days. In following five days period the egg hatches and young been or nymph moults appear. In following stage, nymph moults grow in size three times more than earlier.

Moving further, young adult emerges from nymph moults within Period of another 9 days and also grows in length. Eventually, young adult takes merely 4 days to attain majority and it turns into reproductive honey bees. The life cycle of honey bees going on and reproductive female again hatches the eggs.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 723.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88513513514 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40399100536 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608108108108 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.1125684805 43.030603864 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.3 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215161157929 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083393229225 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931983032946 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147789184461 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0763076114947 0.0819641961636 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.49 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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