The given pie charts compare the expenses in 7 different categories in 1966 and 1996 by American Citizens.
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The pie charts show the expenses of American citizens in two different years that is 1966 and 1996. It includes categories like Food, Cars, Petrol, Restaurants, Furniture, Computers and Books.
According to the given pie chart, during 1966, American people majorly spent their income in food expenses whereas in 1996 they spent widely on Cars.
By looking at both the pie charts, It is clearly understood that Americans had significantly decreased their expenses on food from 1966 to 1996, 44% to 14 % respectively. While amount of money spent on Petrol and Furniture were reduces very minutely. Also the number of people who spent 6% of income on Books was plummeted by 6 times of its original in 1996.
On the other hand, categories in which expenditure was increased from 1966 to 1996 are Cars, Restaurants and Computers. Money spent on Cars was 23% in 1966 which became 45% in 1996. Expenses on restaurants simply got doubled from 1966 to 1996. Computer is the category where expenditure got simply 10 times than it was in 1966.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'whereas', 'while', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.273631840796 0.268076937826 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.139303482587 0.116061578633 120% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0248756218905 0.0759168565197 33% => Some adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0497512437811 0.0366838410393 136% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0348258706468 0.0131127313244 266% => OK
Prepositions: 0.154228855721 0.155750635184 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0398009950249 0.0379272487307 105% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.64592213144 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0248756218905 0.0210936926555 118% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0348258706468 0.0948980150116 37% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0248756218905 0.00967000014798 257% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1040.0 1161.00487805 90% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.9 89% => OK
Chars per words: 5.90909090909 5.90752243213 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73763899035 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.3125 0.337110787985 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.227272727273 0.247514529752 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.181818181818 0.171178102325 106% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.119318181818 0.112407865282 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64592213144 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.546246751206 108% => OK
Word variations: 53.3594173549 49.3433353143 108% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 8.93414634146 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.6 23.0094962315 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8165639887 42.9750493124 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 135.714022679 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 23.0094962315 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.7 0.689975730869 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 40.3272727273 47.7609492067 84% => OK
Elegance: 2.08888888889 2.94281807926 71% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288217342852 0.418131533498 69% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.146420297753 0.181151798455 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0916852596908 0.0850326197045 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.625645633962 0.706616315825 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.149703864424 0.157042692854 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14084781281 0.228904883108 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.095467508634 0.108899403657 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.270190422631 0.367819155151 73% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0363563272323 0.0812612215331 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217255948997 0.316326947829 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536789451129 0.0921553760075 58% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70731707317 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.08536585366 147% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.16585365854 126% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 3.02926829268 165% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 7.1512195122 126% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.