The graph and table below show the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.

Essay topics:

The graph and table below show the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.

The line graph and table provide information on medium temperatures per month and medium amount of time of sunny days a year in three different cities. Overall, New York is the lieder as in the highest temperatures as in the number of hours of days without clouds during a year.
New York and London are similar by the monthly temperatures, but New York exceeds London on 10 Celsius in the hottest month. In July, it is 30 in New York, meanwhile in London temperature is only above 20 degree by Celsius. However, in winter time London a bit wormier than New York. Compere to them Sydney has short range of temperatures during a year. Difference between winter's and summer's months is approximately 10 Celsius degree, where are 25 C in January and nearly 16 C in July.
The cities are ranged by sunny days differently. The first place is taken by New York city, at 2535 days. The second city is Sydney with 2473 days. London has the last position with 1180 sunny days which is on a half less than in Sydney.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 106, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s taken by New York city, at 2535 days. The second city is Sydney with 2473 days. L...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51912568306 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51521690989 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584699453552 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.114634146341 872% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.586363354 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1818181818 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 5.23603664747 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101092408566 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378518744541 0.103423049105 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728035929365 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0916134750443 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120185217218 0.0819641961636 147% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.2329268293 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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