The rendered line graph demonstrates about the difference between the birth rate of two countries over a time period of eighty years.
As it is evident from the graph that in year 1920 the birth rate in China was comparatively lower than America. After that in year 1923 a slight rise was seen in the number of births in both nations. The number of birth in China surpass the birth rate of U.S.A in 1934. Four years latter the birth rate of China slumped and remained stable till 1944. Where as, American birth rate showed almost same trends in year1944.
In year 1949 the birth rate of China kissed the peak. Moreover, number of birth in America also climbed up. The birth rate of China was drop down after 1950's and it kept on decreasing till 2000. Whilst, number of birth in America remained stable from 1957 till 1967 and after that it went down till 2000.
Overall, many trends can be seen in the graph, but, mostly downward trend can be seen.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... over a time period of eighty years. As it is evident from the graph that in ye...
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Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...a was comparatively lower than America. After that in year 1923 a slight rise was see...
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Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
... in China surpass the birth rate of U.S.A in 1934. Four years latter the birth ra...
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Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'An' instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: An
... in China surpass the birth rate of U.S.A in 1934. Four years latter the birth ra...
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Line 3, column 352, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Whereas'?
Suggestion: Whereas
... slumped and remained stable till 1944. Where as, American birth rate showed almost same...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'moreover', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.294736842105 0.268076937826 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.110526315789 0.116061578633 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0578947368421 0.0759168565197 76% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0473684210526 0.0366838410393 129% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0157894736842 0.0131127313244 120% => OK
Prepositions: 0.184210526316 0.155750635184 118% => OK
Participles: 0.0210526315789 0.0379272487307 56% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.04723858072 2.65546596893 77% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0 0.0210936926555 0% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00526315789474 0.00175180941692 300% => OK
Determiners: 0.0894736842105 0.0948980150116 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0105263157895 0.00437022459523 241% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00526315789474 0.00967000014798 54% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 956.0 1161.00487805 82% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.9 88% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52601156069 5.90752243213 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73763899035 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.242774566474 0.337110787985 72% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.132947976879 0.247514529752 54% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0867052023121 0.171178102325 51% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0404624277457 0.112407865282 36% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.04723858072 2.65546596893 77% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531791907514 0.546246751206 97% => OK
Word variations: 44.5797262609 49.3433353143 90% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 8.93414634146 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.7272727273 23.0094962315 68% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.7173437951 42.9750493124 55% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9090909091 135.714022679 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7272727273 23.0094962315 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.454545454545 0.689975730869 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.48048780488 338% => OK
Readability: 29.0220704151 47.7609492067 61% => OK
Elegance: 2.87878787879 2.94281807926 98% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.442455571364 0.418131533498 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.167865513561 0.181151798455 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.119551332834 0.0850326197045 141% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.665493525726 0.706616315825 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.188594246843 0.157042692854 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.218060645658 0.228904883108 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112425798708 0.108899403657 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.330257707757 0.367819155151 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.225516472305 0.0812612215331 278% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291142879479 0.316326947829 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102513747753 0.0921553760075 111% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70731707317 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.14146341463 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.08536585366 73% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 3.16585365854 190% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 0.956097560976 209% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.02926829268 66% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 7.1512195122 140% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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