The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007

Essay topics:

The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007

The graph illustrates the trends in the proportion of cars owned by the Great Britain households from 1961 to 2001.

Over the period 1961 to 2001, the percentage of family possessed of one car and two or more cars moved upward markedly, whereas the portion of households without a car plummeted.

In 1961, only 10% of households had two or more cars, compared with 29% of households with one car. Ten years later, the proportions had risen to 30% and 38% respectively. By 2001, however, the figure for households with two or more cars had surged to 48%, having overtaken the proportion of those with one car, which remained constant at 38% after 1971.

In contrast, the figure for households without a car witnessed a steep decline. The proportion fell sharply from 70% in 1961 to just 40% in 1971. The percentages continued to dip, although less dramatically, to a low point of only 10 % in 2001.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 249, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...seholds with two or more cars had surged to 48%, having overtaken the proportion ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, whereas, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.0 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 758.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82802547771 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73886874802 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56050955414 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9272640638 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.75 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153019261944 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075739715593 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656645509591 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118692789691 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555053534493 0.0819641961636 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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