the graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries

Essay topics:

the graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries

A glance at the graph given reveals how much tea and coffee are bought in by four countries, namely Canada, the US, the UK, and German.
As can be seen from the graph, with the exception of the UK, the amount of coffee imported by all the other three countries is higher than the amount of tea.
The UK imports the largest quantity of tea, at precisely 80000 tonnes, whereas the figure of coffee imported in this country was the smallest, at exactly 30000 tonnes. The second-largest amount of tea is imported by Germany, which is one half as much as the UK's and doubles the volume of the other two countries. However, when it comes to coffee, Germany obtains the first position, importing 50000 tonnes. The figure for tea and coffee bought in by Canada is a little lower than the figure of the US, the differences between the two countries in these figures are just nearly 1000 and 2000 tonnes respectively.

Votes
Average: 9.2 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 32, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...erman. As can be seen from the graph, with the exception of the UK, the amount of coffee imported b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 747.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58282208589 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42203119014 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58282208589 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.5757849251 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.5 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1666666667 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365586379869 0.215688989381 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170263869637 0.103423049105 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835495461671 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252896374048 0.15604864568 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589446773291 0.0819641961636 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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