The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line chart provides information about the amount of waste produced by three companies in more than 15 years.

Overall, the amount of waste produced by companies A and B decreased in the reported period. Conversely, the amount of waste produced by company C increased significantly throughout the years.

In 2000, approximately 12 tonnes of waste was produced by company A and then it decreased to about 11 tonnes in 2005. From 2005 to 2015, the amount of waste produced by the company declined by a third than the initial year. Meanwhile, company B produced around 8 tonnes of waste in 2000, and the amount of waste produced increased to about 10 tonnes in 2005 before it leveled off significantly to about 3 tonnes in the final year.

Company A produced the least waste in 2000 (approximately 4.5 tonnes). However, the amount of waste produced then increased significantly, and in 2015, it produced the biggest amount of waste in 2015 (around 10 tonnes).

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