The graph below shows the average monthly use of a health club in Miami, Florida by all full-time members over last year. The pie charts show the age profile of male and female members.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts give information about the general run of monthly use in a health club in Florida by full-time subscribers last year, and the membership registered by gender.
Overall, both men and women often used the club in the midyear. It is also clear that people at the age of 21-45 had club’s membership.
According to the bar chart, the number of female members used the health club increased significantly, from 500 people in January to over 700 people in September. After having reached its peak, the number of women having the use fell sharply to over 500 attendants in December. The same pattern can be seen for males when the monthly use of the club by men in January was over 500 members, reached its peak in June (nearly 900 males), and decreased to over 500 men in December.
For the pie chart, the vast majority of 21-45-year-old males (55%) registered the membership. This was followed by 65+ age group (25%) and other groups (20%). The same was also true for females with 51%, 32%, and 17% respectively.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67039106145 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58422010759 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575418994413 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.1244325824 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8888888889 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 5.23603664747 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250994443433 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972031933416 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779092095252 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151117584021 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782247832253 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.