The graph below shows the changes in global food and oil prices between 2000 and 2011.
The line graph illustrates how the food and oil prices of the world changed over 11 years from 2000.
Overall, the figures for food and oil fluctuated violently over the period shown. Besides, the food price index and the amount of money spent on a barrel of oil in 2011 were higher than those in 2000.
As can be seen from the graph, in the year 2000, the average global oil was close to $25 per barrel, while the food price index stood at just over 90 points. In the following eight years, the figures for both increased sharply to 190 points and $95 per barrel, respectively.
In the middle of the period from 2008 to 2009, the oil price figure reached a peak of around $130 every barrel before declining significantly be roughly %110 in 2009. In the same year, food prices decreased to about 140 points. In the year 2011, the price of food was highest, at nearly 240 points. The figure for oil rose not as sharply as that of food during the last two years, reached close to $110 per barrel at the end of the period.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 165, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... significantly be roughly %110 in 2009. In the same year, food prices decreased to...
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Line 4, column 226, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d prices decreased to about 140 points. In the year 2011, the price of food was hi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 824.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31413612565 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14003594467 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534031413613 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6969241174 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5555555556 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320258557989 0.215688989381 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149193508454 0.103423049105 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0961730037265 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230124532731 0.15604864568 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616689206229 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.0 61.2550243902 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 11.4140731707 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.