THE GRAPH BELOW SHOWS THE CONSUMPTION OF THE THREE SPREADS FROM 1981 TO 2007
The line graph shows the consumption of spreads in grams between 1981 and 2007. Overall, it can be seen that the consumption of low fat and reduced spreads were higher than the other two spreads.
To begin, the most popular spread that consumed in 1981 was butter at around 140 grams, which is far higher than its counterpart margarine at around 90 grams and then decreased until they both meet in the year 1991 at 100 grams. Then, the consumption of butter decreased continuously and finished at just under 60 grams, while margarine stayed constant for a while and then decreased to 40 grams in the year 2007.
In sharp contrast to this, the consumption of low fat and reduced spreads did not even introduce until 1996, it then increased drastically until it dominated both butter and margarine in 2001 and then had a slight fall to finish at just under 80 grams, which is still the most popular spread in the year 2007.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, still, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 764.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65853658537 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41062737285 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530487804878 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 203.4 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.6602718585 43.030603864 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.8 112.824112599 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8 22.9334400587 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209180303334 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166935821065 0.103423049105 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.169363709567 0.0843802449381 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18075847907 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121156805693 0.0819641961636 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.84 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.34 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 40.7170731707 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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