The bart chart provide information about 3 sectors of the UK economy during twentieth century. At the beginning of this century we can observe the high level of agriculture sector about 50 percent. To the 1950 it achieved of own pick. After that this part of UK economy dropped significantly to approximately 2%. Manufacturing had less grade development in the 1900 than agriculture, about 45%. But his part in the UK economy decreased slightly less than the agricultural sector. And at the end of 2000 it was only about 15%. Regarding to this chart less developed at the 1900 were business and financial. Moreover this sector growths gradually and to the 2000 it was twice than 2 others ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, regarding
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 575.0 965.302439024 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 119.0 196.424390244 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83193277311 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.30283395202 3.73543355544 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85303708951 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 74.0 106.607317073 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621848739496 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 176.4 283.868780488 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.4963110201 43.030603864 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.8888888889 112.824112599 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.2222222222 22.9334400587 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144115124992 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062687974848 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710757842015 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144115124992 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 61.2550243902 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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