The graph below shows four countries of residence of overseas students in Australia.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph shows the number of foreign students coming to Australia from 1982 to 2000. There are Indonesia, Hong Kong, Malaysia and Singapore where students come from.
In 1982, the highest number is Malaysia, at 8,000 students. However, a lot of students from Hong Kong went to Australia, and this number increased sharply in 1990 by 11,000. Singapore is 3,000 which i the lowest figure. All the countries grown quickly between 1990 and 2000, and the number of students from Indonesia had the biggest change.This had a peak at 26,000 in 1998. At the same time, Hong Kong, Malaysia and Singapore also changed more, and all of them got approximately 18,000 students.
Overall, the number of oversea students in Australia had a sharp growth. Most of them are from different countries which had not a developed education, such as Hong Kong or Indonesia
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 340, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 712.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 144.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94444444444 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56173769149 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 198.0 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0347034046 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1111111111 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113862924639 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059734856655 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573758452063 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103810018381 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465101724486 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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