The graph below shows how money was spent on different forms of entertainment over a five year period.
The bar graph below compares the average proportions of economy spent by human beings in five different categories between the time period of 1995 and 2000, in three different continent of the world.
A glance at the figure reveals that, an overwhelming majority of people in the United States spent more money for different forms of entertainment than other mentioned categories.
As a matter of fact, Asia spending in different forms of entertainment rose dramatically from 67 to 110 over five years, where almost all the categories were doubled except the publishing which actually increased marginally in 2000. Moreover, overall spending in the form of entertainment precisely television and publishing in Europe holds nearly 90 percent in both period, with increased in quantity in between the year where as there was a significant rise in the overall spending by European in camera and videos. However, spending made by music remained stable at around 20% in both period. Furthermore, a large proportion of American native people who spent their majority of money for publishing different documentary than television throughout the period of time. Spending made by the citizen of the United State for purchasing camera, video and music increased dramatically in 2000 compared to the spending made in its initial period; however, all the spending were below the one fifth percentage over the period of time in question.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'continent' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'continents'.
Suggestion: continents
...od of 1995 and 2000, in three different continent of the world. A glance at the figure...
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Line 5, column 423, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...creased in quantity in between the year where as there was a significant rise in the ove...
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Line 5, column 757, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...umentary than television throughout the period of time. Spending made by the citizen of the Un...
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Line 5, column 1016, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...below the one fifth percentage over the period of time in question.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, furthermore, however, if, moreover, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 227.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30837004405 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87370574547 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555066079295 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 283.868780488 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.5195746282 43.030603864 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 172.142857143 112.824112599 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.4285714286 22.9334400587 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 5.23603664747 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316661599852 0.215688989381 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137875880818 0.103423049105 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571406459785 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212243134257 0.15604864568 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031364940115 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.2329268293 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 61.2550243902 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 10.3012195122 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.