The graph below shows information on employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005.
The given bar chart illustrates the employment situations in different nations in two year:1995 and 2005
Overall, it is clear that Switzerland showed the highest level of employment in both years. In addition, the proportion of men and women who had jobs increased in all countries in a 10-year period
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In 1995, nearly 70% of men in Switzerland and Iceland were offered jobs, followed by 60% in Newzealand and USA. Australia had the lowest employment rate, at about 56%. Besides, the proportion of women with jobs was the highest in Switzerland, and that in the UK was at the second position. The percentage of females in UK was marginally higher than in USA. Meanwhile, the rates in Australia and New Zealand were equal at around 27%.
From 1995 to 2005, the figure for men rose around 10% in most countries, except UK where recorded a 13% increase. This period also showed a gradual rise by 10% in the proprortion of women in nearly all of countries, with the exceptions of USA and Newzealand, whose gaps between two years were about 15%.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, second, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81215469613 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73229444217 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580110497238 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4375482888 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7777777778 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167373409018 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659709253814 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608279674585 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108405103455 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334250850478 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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