The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six month period in 2011

Essay topics:

The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.

The line graph illustrates about the tourist information office, which had been received the number of queries over six months in the year 2011 in one city. The data is the total number of enquiries per month.

Overall, it is seen clearly from the given chart that enquiries by in person were the most favourite method in the later time and by letter or mail was the least favourite method which used people.

To comments with, in January, as regards enquiries via telephones, it accounted for closely 850 enquiries and experienced a minor increment in March after that it rose over a two-fold to 1600 in June. Moreover, as regards by letter or email, it comprised of below 800 in the starting month, which decreased to below 400 in the end.

Furthermore, the initial figure for in-person enquiries was around 450 and an inclined of 1400 was observed at the end, which was become the most selected method by people, whereas as letter or mail was at the last place in this category in June.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, moreover, so, whereas, as regards

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 824.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70857142857 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45917523921 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.7407213002 43.030603864 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.333333333 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1666666667 22.9334400587 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243737091104 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13544041703 0.103423049105 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127835485 0.0843802449381 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152700995941 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.169311765759 0.0819641961636 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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