The graph below shows the number of inquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six month period in 2011

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The graph below shows the number of inquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.

The given line chart provides insights into how many inquiries are collected by the Tourist Information Office in a particular city via three means of communication over 6 months in 2011.
Looking from an overall perspective, although in January, the number of face-to-face inquiries was the smallest figure from the chart, after six months with an increasing trend it came out on top in June. While inquiring by email or letter experienced a downward tendency and became the least common choice opted.
In detail, there was a reverse tendency between the two ways of communication. First, in January, the figure for face-to-face inquiries was the smallest number, with only 400, and after a significant increase, in March, this figure doubled, to 800. And from March to June, the figure for direct inquiries continually went up and reached its peak at 1900. By contrast, the figure for inquiring by letter or email, started at 800 in January and then halved in June, to approximately 400.
Turning to the other method remaining, at the beginning of the period, the number of enquires by telephone was roughly 900, which was the highest figure in the first month of the year 2011. From January to February, this figure declined slightly to 800, and still became the highest number in February. Before remaining unstable at 100 from March to April, this figure increased by 200. From April, the number of inquiries by telephone underwent a noticeable upsurge, and ranked the second position in June, with 1600.

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Average: 9.2 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, still, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 33.7804878049 169% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 965.302439024 131% => OK
No of words: 251.0 196.424390244 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02788844622 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71119562865 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 106.607317073 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561752988048 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 283.868780488 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 13.0 3.36585365854 386% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2954972888 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.727272727 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8181818182 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 5.23603664747 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170987102575 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620807163543 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778794983253 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125594524672 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0889557715948 0.0819641961636 109% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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