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The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012.

The line graph compares four nations in terms of the proportion of import from Australia between 1990 and 2012.<o:p></o:p><o:p> </o:p>It is clear that Australian export to China saw the most significant increase during the period shown. Additionally, while the percentages of export to Japan and US dropped, the figures for China and India rose.<o:p></o:p><o:p> </o:p>In 1990, just over 25% was the proportion of Australian export to Japan, this figure was nearly 15% higher than that of US. At the same time, the percentages of China and India were substantially lower, at around 2%. From 2005 to 2010, China witnessed a dramatic rise in the proportion of import from Australia, and this figure overtook that of Japan to become the highest percentage in this period.<o:p></o:p><o:p> </o:p>In 2010, the proportion of Australian export to China rapidly reached its highest point at nearly 30%. Similarly, after reaching its peak at roughly 8%, the figure for India slightly felt to 6%. By contrast, Japan and US saw substantial decreases in the proportions of import from Australia to about 18% and 7% respectively.<o:p></o:p>

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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS Academic

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, similarly, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2826.0 965.302439024 293% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 349.0 196.424390244 178% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 8.09742120344 4.92477711251 164% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 3.73543355544 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 7.19085825611 2.65546596893 271% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.355300859599 0.547539520022 65% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 671.4 283.868780488 237% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.45097560976 131% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 22.4926829268 258% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 369.119974474 43.030603864 858% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 471.0 112.824112599 417% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.1666666667 22.9334400587 254% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0467647343011 0.215688989381 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0339066029547 0.103423049105 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0168863276175 0.0843802449381 20% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0467647343011 0.15604864568 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 45.8 13.2329268293 346% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -12.77 61.2550243902 -21% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 21.2 6.51609756098 325% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.5 10.3012195122 286% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 30.59 11.4140731707 268% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 71.0 11.4329268293 621% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.2 10.9970731707 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.0658536585 280% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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