The graph below shows in percentage terms the changing patterns of domestic access to modern technology in homes in the U.K.
The graph below demonstrates the variation of private use of cd player, mobile phone, home computer and internet access in the UK over the course seven years started from 1996.
Looking at the graph, it can be see that the trend was upward in all four devices. There has been a gradual increased in the cd player,PC and internet access .However, mobile phone roses erratically .In1996, cd player had the biggest percentage with 60%, doubled home computer with 30% and almost tripled mobile phone with 20%. The internet access only appeared in 1998 with approximately 10% but then rocketed to more than 405 in 2003. The mobile phone was the smallest in 1996 by it overcomed the home computer to become the second biggest .In 2003, cd player still had the biggest figure with above 80% while the internet access had the smallest .
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , PC
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Suggestion: However
...n the cd player,PC and internet access .However, mobile phone roses erratically .In1996...
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Suggestion: In1996
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Suggestion:
...with approximately 10% but then rocketed to more than 405 in 2003. The mobile pho...
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Suggestion: In
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, second, still, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 690.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 143.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82517482517 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34668797339 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629370629371 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 199.8 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.1404939463 43.030603864 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.0 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 5.23603664747 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122251870021 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703266825516 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377230802234 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11632306931 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265966602117 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.