The graph below shows the total value of exports and the value of fuel, food and manufactured goods exported by one country from 2000 to 2005.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Refer on this site for the graph.http://www.ielts-exam.net/practice_tests/35/IELTS_Writing_Task_1/296/
The graph illustrates the overall value of exports and the fuel, food and the produced products exported by one nation from 2000 to 2005.
Let us take a closer look at the value of fuel exports that earned 300,000 million dollars by 2000. Although, its started to declined by 2001 having the sales of 260,000 million dollars. Followed by another slumped by 2002. On the other hand, it recovered and started to rose consistently by 2003 to 2005.
Turning to the value of selected exports. Fuel dropped approximately from 45,000 million dollars by 2000 to 20,000 million dollars by 2005. However, manufactured goods shows a dramatic rise in 2000 to 2001 in which later achieved a plateau by 2002, but it gradually plumped by 2003. Then rose up again by 2004 to 2005. In addition, food presents a slight dropped from 2000 to 2001, but remained stable from 2002 to 2005.
In summary, the value of fuel exports showed a great difference in terms of earnings from year 2000 to 2005. Followed by the fluctuation of value in manufactured goods while food remained stable in its value from year 2000 to 2005.
The graph illustrates the overall value of exports and the fuel, food and the produced products exported by one nation from 2000 to 2005.
Description: can you re-write this sentence?
Although, its started to declined by 2001
Although, it started to decline by 2001
Although, its started to declined by 2001 having the sales of 260,000 million dollars. Followed by another slumped by 2002.
Description: this is a clause. where is the sentence?
in which later achieved a plateau by 2002
in which it later achieved a plateau by 2002
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Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 10
No. of Words: 192 200
No. of Characters: 885 1000
No. of Different Words: 93 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.722 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.609 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.456 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 60 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 50 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 24 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 9 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.124 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.583 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.418 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.593 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.11 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4