Essay topics:
The graph below shows the unemployment figures amongst women of different age groups.
Given is the graph illustrating jobless women of various ages.
It is clear that the most jobless can be seen in the age group of 45. By contrast, between the ages of 25 and 30 are the category receiving the least unemployment figure.
According to the line graph, the youngest group occupy the high number of unemployment, at 15%, while, people in 20, 55 age groups and the age of 65 are significantly lower, at 10%.
A noticeable fact is that there are a mere minority of people who are in the 25 and 35-year-old group having no work, not over 5%. Conversely, the largest proportion is made up of 45-year-old women.
Votes
Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 515.0 965.302439024 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 112.0 196.424390244 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59821428571 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.2531531234 3.73543355544 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77744594815 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 106.607317073 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.669642857143 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 152.1 283.868780488 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7034346784 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8333333333 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158740639645 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767827046187 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450012422309 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961461631202 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399341532728 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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