The line graph compares the expenditure on books in Germany , France , Italy and Austria from 1995 to 2005.
Overall , it is clear that German people spent significantly more money than people in the other countries in term of books. Moreover , all four countries witnessed a rise in expenditure of this item throughout the 10-year period.
While Germans were the highest overall spenders , with an itial point of 80 million dollars on books in 1995 , the figure of Austria was significantly lower , at only about 30 millions dollars. However, the gap in spending between these two countries narrowed as the expenditure on books in Austria increased considerably , reaching a peak of slightly above 6 million dollars in the final year . Despite some fluctuations , the amount of money spent on books in German increased and finished at roughly 95 millions dollars throughout 10 years
The spending figures on books in Italy and France , which accounted for 50 and about 55 million dollars respectively in 1995
, followed a similiar fluctuating upward trend over the period. By the year 2005 , the amount of money spent on books in France reached a highest point of around 75 millions dollar , 8 millions higher than that of Italy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 60, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...ares the expenditure on books in Germany , France , Italy and Austria from 1995 to...
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...expenditure on books in Germany , France , Italy and Austria from 1995 to 2005. O...
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... and Austria from 1995 to 2005. Overall , it is clear that German people spent si...
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...her countries in term of books. Moreover , all four countries witnessed a rise in ...
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...ermans were the highest overall spenders , with an itial point of 80 million dolla...
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...t of 80 million dollars on books in 1995 , the figure of Austria was significantly...
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...igure of Austria was significantly lower , at only about 30 millions dollars. Howe...
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...only about 30 millions dollars. However, the gap in spending between these two co...
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... books in Austria increased considerably , reaching a peak of slightly above 6 mil...
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...bove 6 million dollars in the final year . Despite some fluctuations , the amount ...
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Line 3, column 422, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...e final year . Despite some fluctuations , the amount of money spent on books in G...
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...ing figures on books in Italy and France , which accounted for 50 and about 55 mil...
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... 55 million dollars respectively in 1995 , followed a similiar fluctuating upward...
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... million dollars respectively in 1995 , followed a similiar fluctuating upward ...
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Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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... trend over the period. By the year 2005 , the amount of money spent on books in F...
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Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
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... money spent on books in France reached a highest point of around 75 millions dol...
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...ghest point of around 75 millions dollar , 8 millions higher than that of Italy. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1023.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08955223881 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7636518899 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577114427861 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.0026852372 43.030603864 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.142857143 112.824112599 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7142857143 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 1.69756097561 1001% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181383667863 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960668405591 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066731561843 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117514854832 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061080002482 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.