The graph shows the income of four cafes in New York over the last year Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

Essay topics:

The graph shows the income of four cafes in New York over the last year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The depicted graph illustrates the earnings of four distinct cafes, namely The Tea Room, Internet Express, Wi-fi café, Café Cool in New York last year.

Overall, what stands out from the graph is that the amount of money gained by all cafes mentioned by the graph experienced upward trends, except for the case of The Tea Room. Moreover, it is apparent that Wi-fi café received the highest amount of money at the end of the year.

As can be seen, the Tea Room had the highest amount with 160 million dollars in January. Afterward, this figure increased considerably to nearly 175 million dollars in March after a sharp decrease in February. The following months saw a dramatic fall to approximately 45 million dollars in December. In contrast, wifi café witnessed an enormous rise to nearly 185 million dollars in December from the starting point of roughly 45 million dollars in January.

At the beginning of the year, Internet Express earned exactly 100 million dollars and this figure for Café Cool was just 30 million. Afterward, both cafés experienced a substantial increase during the span.

Votes
Average: 6.6 (4 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, except for, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 930.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05434782609 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54728440599 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3825562492 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.333333333 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0794911213421 0.215688989381 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333741821914 0.103423049105 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523795098201 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0658832844249 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637144590366 0.0819641961636 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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