The graph shows the spending on medical care education pension of a particular country from 2001 to 2051 summarise the information by selecting and reporting main feature and make comparison where relevant

Essay topics:

The graph shows the spending on medical care, education, pension of a particular country from 2001 to 2051 .summarise the information by selecting and reporting main feature and make comparison where relevant.

The provided lime graph illustrations the information about expenditure of country on pension, education, medical care until 2001 with future prediction up-to 2051.

Overall ,it is clear that spending of a nation on these selected areas remained constant till 2011 with exception of minor dip in education cost. However, it is expected That there will be incline in pension spending and cost of medical care will follow opposite trend.

To begin with, 16% of the budget was spent by government on education during 2001 ;whereas, spending on medical care and pension was nearby 6% and 11% respectively. The spending on three areas remained fix till 2011 and it is projected to be same in next decade .surprisingly, estimates show that after 2021 spending on pension will increase sharply and reach at under a fifth. In contrast, in upcoming years the spending on medical care will decreased drastically and remained only 2%.

Probing further, in education spending, estimates depict a small dip after 2021 and then will remain unchanged by 2051. It is interesting to note that country's spending on pension and medical care will be equal (8%) between 2021 and 2031. Controversialy ,pension cost will be at top level by 2051.

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Average: 8.1 (16 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, then, whereas, in contrast, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1035.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14925373134 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74023238845 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567164179104 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0576228618 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257528482328 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119293560871 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716277023852 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178374332911 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645900626644 0.0819641961636 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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