The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.

Essay topics:

The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.

Given is the graph illustrating the number of London Underground Station passengers in 16 hours.

It is clear that the number is subject to overall volatility. Moreover, the peek time which has a huge amount of travellers is at 8 o'clock.

Standing at 100 passengers at 6 o'clock, the growth pattern carried on at 400 people after 2 hours. However, there is abruptly surge at 10 o'clock and followed by a growth pattern that was more varied, there is a slight lull to 300 passengers at 14 o'clock.

From 15 o'clock to 16 o'clock, the number of passengers experiences a slight decrease in recovery to the first point. After a mild decrease, the figure for customers increases by 290 people to 390 people at 18 o'clock and decelerating gradually until midnight.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: o'clock
...has a huge amount of travellers is at 8 oclock. Standing at 100 passengers at 6 ocl...
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Suggestion: o'clock
...ock. Standing at 100 passengers at 6 oclock, the growth pattern carried on at 400 p...
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Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
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Suggestion: o'clock
... However, there is abruptly surge at 10 oclock and followed by a growth pattern that w...
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Line 5, column 248, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
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Suggestion: o'clock
...s a slight lull to 300 passengers at 14 oclock. From 15 oclock to 16 oclock, the nu...
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Line 7, column 9, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
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Suggestion: o'clock
...300 passengers at 14 oclock. From 15 oclock to 16 oclock, the number of passengers ...
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Line 7, column 22, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
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Suggestion: o'clock
...s at 14 oclock. From 15 oclock to 16 oclock, the number of passengers experiences a...
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Line 7, column 209, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
...eases by 290 people to 390 people at 18 oclock and decelerating gradually until midnig...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, moreover

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 631.0 965.302439024 65% => OK
No of words: 131.0 196.424390244 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81679389313 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38312328216 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81775568511 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618320610687 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 180.9 283.868780488 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0227039967 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1428571429 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199138225583 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122915638545 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.186559875963 0.0843802449381 221% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185202855395 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.222155759687 0.0819641961636 271% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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