The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.
The given diagram provides a comparison of the volume of London passengers using underground station during the opening time.
From an overall perspective, it is conspicuous that the advent of underground station passengers in London is fluctuated for every hour in a day. To be clear, there is an appearance of an dramatical upward trend from 6 to 8 AM, from 16 to 18 PM while the other times show an slight increase in the statistic or a downward trend.
According to recorded data on the graph, it is obvious that from there number of passenger substantially increase from 6 to 8 AM and 16 to 18 PM. Following that, the data of passenger gently rise from 10 AM to 14 PM and 19:30 PM to 21 PM, which the previous increase nearly 1,5 times when compared with the later. However, there is sharply decrease up to 2 times and 4 times in the period from 8 AM to 10 AM and from 18 PM to 20 PM.
In the stage of the dramatic upsurge in the volume of customers in underground station, it reaches peak at 8 AM, which the existence of 400 people at that time. Nonetheless, the participation of passengers at 6 AM and 16 PM stand at the last point, with the given data is merely 100 people. Finally, the common volume of passengers at each time in a day range from 150 to 300 people.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... To be clear, there is an appearance of an dramatical upward trend from 6 to 8 AM,...
^^
Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... 16 to 18 PM while the other times show an slight increase in the statistic or a d...
^^
Line 7, column 225, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'stand' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'stands'.
Suggestion: stands
...ipation of passengers at 6 AM and 16 PM stand at the last point, with the given data ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, nonetheless, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1044.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 240.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73130005675 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495833333333 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.9829003599 43.030603864 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213417412791 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106248973364 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0938145149191 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151423154964 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758600642968 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.25 11.4140731707 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... To be clear, there is an appearance of an dramatical upward trend from 6 to 8 AM,...
^^
Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... 16 to 18 PM while the other times show an slight increase in the statistic or a d...
^^
Line 7, column 225, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'stand' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'stands'.
Suggestion: stands
...ipation of passengers at 6 AM and 16 PM stand at the last point, with the given data ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, nonetheless, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1044.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 240.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73130005675 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495833333333 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.9829003599 43.030603864 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213417412791 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106248973364 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0938145149191 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151423154964 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758600642968 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.25 11.4140731707 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.