the graphs below show the changes in age structure of population in a European country from 1901 to 1981 an a projection to 2021

Essay topics:

the graphs below show the changes in age structure of population in a European country from 1901 to 1981 an a projection to 2021

The pie charts illustrate the shares of age structure of population in a European country between 1901 and 1981 and a projection in 2021.

Overall, the total population increased and continue this trend in the future. It is clear that the vast majority of the population ages from 0 to 64. Additionally, while other age groups show upward patterns, 0-64 group demonstrates the opposite.

Initially, the total population was approximately 38 miilions, it grew to 58 million in the next 8 decades and is projected to reach 64 million in 2021. In 1991, The 0-64 group accounted for 95% of the population. However, this figure declined by 12% in 1981 and is speculated to plunge down to 78%.

The population aging 65-84 held the share of only 4% in 1901 but this proportion quadrupled in 1981 and is projected to stay the same in 2021. Noticeably, 1% of the country’s citizens aged over 85. Nonetheless, the percentage is expected to witness a mighty growth by 5% in 2021.

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Average: 4.4 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, nonetheless, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8630952381 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97894515375 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60119047619 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0043936469 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 5.23603664747 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367356566615 0.215688989381 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129963870901 0.103423049105 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126901494026 0.0843802449381 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238990076515 0.15604864568 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136766761959 0.0819641961636 167% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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