The table gives data about the proportion of cinema visitors out of the whole population in Australia with the frequency of visiting between 1996 and 2000. The line graph illustrates the cinema visits according to 4 age groups from 14 years old to 50 plus.
Overall, most Australians would like to go to the cinema, as a result, the average visits were considerably stable. Additionally, cinema visits according to age groups experienced a fluctuation over the period of 5 years.
It can be seen in the table that cinema attendants always took up more than half of Australia’s population, specifically, the figure maintained stability of 62-72% from 1996 to 2000. In terms of frequency, the average number of visits was 10.3 in 1996, then increased to 11.1 in 1997, before being steady at 8.2-8.3 in the next 3 years.
According to the line graph, throughout the period, the figures for 4 age groups were stably up and down at around 10 visits each year. Besides, the youngest group, 14-24, was account for the highest percentage of cinema visits in Australia, which was 15 at least and 24 at peak. In comparison to a minority one, the 50 plus age group, which made up only 10-12 visits
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, then, at least, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 990.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80582524272 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73228102514 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601941747573 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5476179817 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8888888889 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316384664855 0.215688989381 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138408697124 0.103423049105 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446202944643 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202441682036 0.15604864568 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427641675539 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.