The graphs below show the numbers of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995 in several employment sectors of the Republic of Freedonia.
The given graphs compares the information regarding proportion of male and female employment in various six mentioned categories in republic of Freedonia in two separate years; 1975 and 1995.
Over the span of 30 year, employment ratio in non-defence public sector was more popular along with higher retention whereas there was an opposite trend in defence public sector.
It is clear that, numbers of employment by male and female in non-defence public sectors holds highest position in 1975 (with 900 and 700 individual employment respectively) and this trend was then equal in 1995. Similarly, employee preference on working in a manufacturing sector were remain unchanged throughout the period in the question; about 300 female employee and 700 male employee get involved in producing various goods under the manufacturing sector.
Proportion of female employee in communications sector doubled from nearly 300 peoples in 1975 to 600 in 1995 whereas number of male working in similar sector remained unchanged at about just above 300. Moreover, working in a finance sector by female increased dramatically from 200 in 1975 to just under 500 however the proportion of male employment in same sector remained constant throughout the period. There was a slight increase in the ratio of female worker in the field of retail trade then men whereas the interest of female worker working in defence sector increased dramatically from 20 in 1975 to 100 in 1995 and there was a marginal declined was noticed in the male interest working in a defence sector at the end of the period.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'holds the highest'.
Suggestion: holds the highest
...nd female in non-defence public sectors holds highest position in 1975 with 900 and 700 indiv...
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Line 3, column 279, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
...ce on working in a manufacturing sector were remain unchanged throughout the period ...
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Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'remained'.
Suggestion: remained
... working in a manufacturing sector were remain unchanged throughout the period in the ...
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Line 3, column 357, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'employee' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'employees'.
Suggestion: employees
...eriod in the question; about 300 female employee and 700 male employee get involved in p...
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Line 3, column 379, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'employee' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'employees'.
Suggestion: employees
... about 300 female employee and 700 male employee get involved in producing various goods...
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Line 4, column 743, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...efence sector at the end of the period.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, regarding, similarly, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 33.7804878049 175% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 3.97073170732 479% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 965.302439024 137% => OK
No of words: 256.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17578125 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79344401551 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4765625 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 400.5 283.868780488 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.2826085978 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 189.285714286 112.824112599 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.5714285714 22.9334400587 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 5.23603664747 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368812002322 0.215688989381 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.19309380201 0.103423049105 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786265915001 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228059531722 0.15604864568 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925291579646 0.0819641961636 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.3 13.2329268293 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 61.2550243902 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.3012195122 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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