The graphs below show the primary social networking of British users in 2010 and projected figures for 2018.

Essay topics:

The graphs below show the primary social networking of British users in 2010 and projected figures for 2018.

The pie charts illustrate the main social network by Britain users in 2010 with predicted values for 2018.

Overall, the number of Facebook users has increased and this trend is expected to continue until the end year, while the other categories declined significantly. However, Bebo disappears at the end year.

In the United Kingdom, facebook by far has been widely used and began with almost half of the total and continue to move up its percentage to nearly three quarters in 2018. Twitter stayed the same as the second-highest from 2010 until the end year from 18.33% to 17.39 % respectively.

Meanwhile, Pinterest and Google Plus users started the year to around 16.95% and 10.45% respectively. However, these figures are envisaged to decline modestly of about 9% difference in 2018 as compared to Bebo users which gained a data from the beginning of 8.17% and it is anticipated to disappear in the end year, 2018.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 258, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hich gained a data from the beginning of 8.17% and it is anticipated to disappear...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 775.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03246753247 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72037825613 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1471916848 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.714285714 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173797385689 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796023103895 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0926789919265 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121366093246 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102698092518 0.0819641961636 125% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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