The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age.
The bar graphs below illustrates the average proportions of male and female who buy three different forms of music in London,
A glance at the figure reveals that, an overwhelming majority of male purchase the more music albums than female counterparts.
As a matter of fact, average percentage of male who purchase the pop music is just below the 30 percent in England whereas the average spending for rock music increased its popularity more than three time than of people who chose classical music album. Similarly, female native music listener in all three categories are just 3 percent. Moreover, 30 percent of average native teenagers between 16-24 in England purchased pop music and there is even more population who loved to have the album of rock music but the popularity of classical music among the same age group are below the 10 percent. Furthermore, the popularity of music is in decreasing pattern with the increasing number of people age, just above 30 percent people with age group of 25-35 purchased the pop music and this trend is then decreased by marginally in the proportion of people who follow rock music, however, there are only 7 percent of similar age group of people who love to listen classical music. It is also interesting to note that the age group of 35-44 listen pop and rock music below the 20 percent and the trend of listening classical music by this age group were below 5%; however the age group of 45 and above people in UK listen pop and rock music nearly 10 percent and this proportion is doubled in case of classical music in London in question.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, then, whereas, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 965.302439024 137% => OK
No of words: 276.0 196.424390244 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78260869565 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50922212093 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.449275362319 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 424.8 283.868780488 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 22.4926829268 205% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.8147808129 43.030603864 223% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 220.0 112.824112599 195% => OK
Words per sentence: 46.0 22.9334400587 201% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.0 5.23603664747 306% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289856203154 0.215688989381 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170959912623 0.103423049105 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586114583712 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172332886746 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667835303079 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.1 13.2329268293 182% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.25 61.2550243902 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 10.3012195122 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.9970731707 186% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.