The graphs below shows four categories of cities fruits ant the top three countries to which these were exported in 2012.

Essay topics:

The graphs below shows four categories of cities fruits ant the top three countries to which these were exported in 2012.

The four different types of fruit and top three nations to which were exported in 2012 is depicted by the horizontal bar chart. The data has been calibrated in thousands.
Initially, the biggest chunk of oranges was exporting from South Africa as compared to other countries, that was 1000. Whereas, the least numbers of orange had from the United States. Moreover, lemons accounted for above 400 highest in Mexico, but in Argentina, it was only 100 respectively. The United States exported 200 of lemons in 2012 rather than others.

As further scrutiny reveals that there was significant growth in the number of grapefruits in Turkey and Mexico, which accounted for 400 and 300 orderly. Also besides, the exports of other fruits increased steeply in Mexico, that was 500. Whilst, Egypt and the United States that comprised an almost similar count of exported other fruits in 2012.
Overall, the most sticking feature that emerged from the chart is that Mexico, South Africa, and Turkey followed an upward trend in comparison with another country.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
Essay Categories
IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS Academic

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 119, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ared to other countries, that was 1000. Whereas, the least numbers of orange had from t...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 155, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...hich accounted for 400 and 300 orderly. Also besides, the exports of other fruits in...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, so, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12209302326 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46134941466 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627906976744 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2672778721 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173657838576 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713071804174 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102156583436 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118650955479 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113723351551 0.0819641961636 139% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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