The graphs show a comparison of the expenses in the UK and the US.

Essay topics:

The graphs show a comparison of the expenses in the UK and the US.

The given pie charts illustrate the difference in how people in the UK and the US spend their money.

Overall, people in both the UK and the US spend the majority of their money on basic essentials of daily life such as food and rent. In contrast, the expenses on leisure items such as DVDs and books are much less significant.

In the UK, renting is taking up the biggest proportion of expenses, which is at 30%. On the contrary, in the US, people are spending more on food with 25% of expenses, while rent comes in second with slightly 5% less.

According to the charts, both countries are spending the same portion of their budget of 15% on transport and going out, as well as 10% on leisure items such as DVDs. However, people in the US tend to buy more books, whose ratio is at 15% compared to only 12% in the UK.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, well, while, in contrast, such as, as well as, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 673.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34193548387 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29185773176 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561290322581 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 195.3 283.868780488 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.1374162706 43.030603864 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.166666667 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8333333333 5.23603664747 264% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163569107743 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868216207042 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0296044806144 0.0843802449381 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108162448548 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294063824555 0.0819641961636 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.19 11.4140731707 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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