The graphs show the monthly prices of rice exports from Thailand and Vietnam between 2012 and 2015

Essay topics:

The graphs show the monthly prices of rice exports from Thailand and Vietnam between 2012 and 2015

The graphs reveal the prices of rice exported from Thailand and Vietnam from 2012 to 2015.
Overall, rice exports had their prices drop over 3 years in both countries. While Thailand charged less towards the end of most years, the opposite was true for Vietnam.
To put it more specifically, after reaching a peak of 400 US dollars in the February of 2012, rice prices of Thailand, together with those in 2015, the former going downwards and the latter going upwards. The gap between them remained to be around 250 US dollars. Ever experiencing the same increasing trend with the former, the figure in 2013 began to shrink suddenly to just above 150 US dollars before hovering at the price till the end of that year.
The prices of rice exports from Vietnam were much cheaper than those from Thailand, with the figure of the latter roughly doubling that of the former in the first year. The prices then did not exceed 200 US dollars, which was the highest point ever registered in Vietnam. The year 2015 witnessed the lowest price at 25 US dollars in January, which gradually increased threefold, holding the original last position in the second graph.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 20, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[3]
Message: You should probably use 'export'.
Suggestion: export
... end of that year. The prices of rice exports from Vietnam were much cheaper than tho...
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Line 4, column 273, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ghest point ever registered in Vietnam. The year 2015 witnessed the lowest price at...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31678656764 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8740880951 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.222222222 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.405693924355 0.215688989381 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18421028571 0.103423049105 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.192947003335 0.0843802449381 229% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.322468544178 0.15604864568 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.219353526849 0.0819641961636 268% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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