The graphs shows the Cost for watching movies and change in market share of three different ways of watching movies
The line graph illustrates the amount of money spent for watching movies in three different purposes (cinema,DVD and legal download) whereas as in provided pie chart percentage of market share of watching movies
As it is presented in the line graph, the highest number of money was spent on cinema tickets in 2005 which after experienced a inclination and reached at £14 in 2011. However,in terms of DVD exhibited steep downfall of £ 2 in 2007 before reach all time high. Next,in legal download was cheapest way to watch movies in 2005 but it witnessed inclined and reached to £8 in the later year which was the lower cost of watch movies in 2011
On the other hand,in pie chart, in 2005 most individuals preferred to watch movies on rent a DVD which after inclined to 57.10%in the initial year.similarly in case of cinema it was around 30% in 2005 but it witnessed a downfall of almost 12%. Nextly in watch online was recorded around 6% which increases by four times to 24%.
Overall, it is explicitly seen that DVD show a complete dominaced throughout the period whereas, in market most people prefer DVD but inclination in watching movies online
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , DVD
...ovies in three different purposes cinema,DVD and legal download whereas as in provid...
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Line 2, column 127, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...tickets in 2005 which after experienced a inclination and reached at £14 in 2011....
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Line 2, column 176, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...tion and reached at £14 in 2011. However,in terms of DVD exhibited steep downfall o...
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Line 2, column 221, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '£2'.
Suggestion: £2
...erms of DVD exhibited steep downfall of £ 2 in 2007 before reach all time high. Nex...
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Line 2, column 265, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...in 2007 before reach all time high. Next,in legal download was cheapest way to watc...
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Line 2, column 284, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'was the cheapest'.
Suggestion: was the cheapest
...h all time high. Next,in legal download was cheapest way to watch movies in 2005 but it witn...
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Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
... watch movies in 2011 On the other hand,in pie chart, in 2005 most individuals pre...
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Line 4, column 172, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ut inclination in watching movies online
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, similarly, whereas, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58889938005 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 22.4926829268 178% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 143.129312162 43.030603864 333% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 191.2 112.824112599 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.0 22.9334400587 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.23603664747 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350900129089 0.215688989381 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16355989418 0.103423049105 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113276732828 0.0843802449381 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235654682468 0.15604864568 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128893766753 0.0819641961636 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.1 13.2329268293 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.8 61.2550243902 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 10.3012195122 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.9970731707 164% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.