he charts below show the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodations in England and wales between 1918 and 2011.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay topics:

he charts below show the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodations in England and wales between 1918 and 2011.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates the number of families percentage-wise either living in owned homes or rented accommodations in England and Wales between the years 1918 and 2011.

Overall, the first glance at the chart makes it quite evident that home ownership among households have steadily increased while the number of people renting a place has gone down at the end of the period. Although the trends seems pretty consistent, the last year shows an anomaly.

It seems that owning a house has become more popular among families. There is an upwards trend that is gradual throughout 1918 to 1991. It was least famous to own homes in 1918 while most trendy in 2001, when about 68 percent owned private abodes. We observe a plateau during the decade before 2001, while a sudden drop follows it in 2011 when numbers drop to 64 percent.

The percentage of renters show a downwards trend throughout the time period. It was about 78 percent, highest ever, in 1918 after which it came down to below 70 percent in 1939. Although it remained same for about 15 years or so, the decline continued again up until 2001. The lowest ever figure was recorded that year at only 30 percent. However, there is a slight rise visible in the next decade once again.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 70, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'There are an upwards'?
Suggestion: There are an upwards
...has become more popular among families. There is an upwards trend that is gradual throughout 1918 t...
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Line 13, column 101, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the highest'.
Suggestion: , the highest
...the time period. It was about 78 percent, highest ever, in 1918 after which it came down ...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1039.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78801843318 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38768385927 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635944700461 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.1042019091 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5833333333 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.08333333333 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187418781405 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619126953808 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801604020402 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134135117846 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102187761184 0.0819641961636 125% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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