Holiday accommodation chosen by the British in 2010

Essay topics:

Holiday accommodation chosen by the British in 2010

The bar chart compares the figures of the British making a choice in four kinds of holiday accommodation, namely Self-catering, Caravan, Camping and Hotel in 2010.

Overall, the hotel was the most accommodation chosen in nations. Additionally, the percentage of people in Northern Ireland selecting Caravan was higher than those of other countries.

The rate of people in England choosing hotel for their holiday accommodation, at around 56%, was highest in 4 nations, while Scotland and Wales saw their slightly lower figures, 52% and 49% respectively. 30% of holiday makers in Scotland chose Self-catering, which was higher than those of England and Wales, but its figure for camping was lower than these two countries. It is noticeable that Wales was the only country the percentage of travelers selecting Camping was highest in the bar chart, at around 15%.

Turning to Northern Ireland, the figure of visitors opting Caravan was nearly three times higher than that of Scotland, at roughly 30%. Additionally, Self-catering and Camping in this country also had the same proportion, about 11%.

Votes
Average: 9.1 (17 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36206896552 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93727642771 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568965517241 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.767442586 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.625 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128902624726 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062035525535 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833089099962 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888404152143 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747942266724 0.0819641961636 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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